失业给中国带来了什么

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WhatUnemploymentBringstoChina

Fifteenyearsago,theword"unemployment"wasregardedasthemostestrangedwordandthepatentofcapitalism.ItisallofasuddenformillionsofChineseworkers,especiallyintextile,tofindthattheireverwellprofitedfactoriesnearlybankruptandthemselvesunemployed.Somecriticizeitasacruelkillertothesecurityofsociety.  However,  theadvantagesof"unemployment",inmyopinion,outweighthedisadvantagesinthelong

Tobeginwith,"unemployment"readjuststheindustrialstructureofthestate-ownedenterprises,whichshowsmoreandmoredefects.ItisundeniablethatproductsmadeinChinahavelesspetitivepowerparedwithimportedones.Becausethewholestructureofourindustryislabourintensive,whichisnowtangledwithhighcostandlowefficiency.Thefirstinitiativetosolvetheproblem,ruthlessbutuseful,istocutdowntheextraworkers,which,ineffect,savesomedyingenterprisesfromtheedgeofbankruptcyandenhancetheirefficiencyandpetitiveness.

"Unemployment"insometraditionalindustries,onthecontrary,stimulatesthedevelopmentofsomenewindustries,suchasserviceindustry,whichcreatemanyjobsforthoselayoffs,which,inturn,stimulatetheindustrytoprosper,asbeesanincreasinglyimportantpartofthesocialeconomy.

Anotherprofoundinfluence"unemployment"bringsisthatithasuprootedthetraditionaloutdatedmodesofthought,carvedinourminds,fiercelyandthoroughly,thatalifelongjobnolongerexists.  Theeraofplannedeconomyhasetoitsend.Toughpetitionhasterminatedthesecurityofjobandoneshouldpreparehimselfforthecorrespondingtransformationofsociety."Run,orlose"beesthegoldenruleofmodityeconomy.Amazingly,moreandmorelayoffstookthelesson,madeproperadjustmentandthenfindthemselvesnewpositions.

"Unemployment",asanunavoidableeconomicphenomenon,ispoundingonouroutdatedsocialsystemstrongly.  Itislikearainstormthatuprootsthetraditionalmodesofthoughtandbringslifetothediversifiedindustries,transformingthetraditionalindustriesandwashingawaythedeep-rootedbutoutdatedthoughts.Faceitproperlyandwewillhaveashiningfuture.

简  评

失业下岗作为市场经济一个不可回避的现象，成为经济体制改革的热点。如何看待下岗现象，失业下岗的积极作用何在，这是文章所要告诉我们的。

习作的结构紧凑，论说有力。乐颖毅同学能把失业下岗的现象和服务业在市场经济框架下的蓬勃发展联系起来看，找出其中的逻辑关系和互动性。并且指出这些事实和现象的背后是更深一层的思想形态的变革，是旧的思维模式的破碎和新的模式的确立。

这样就构成了一个完整的论述，在最后一段把“失业”比作暴风雨，正以其强大的势头，冲刷着长期以来的传统观点，把论述推向了高潮。

文章的构思新颖，谋篇巧妙，段与段之间有紧密的逻辑关系，使整个论述显得简洁、有力。但不足的是每一点上的论述应再细化深入一点，有些用词表达不够准确、生动。