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MyPlanforSummerVacation

Thelongingsummervacationisapproaching,itisthebestpartoftheschoolyearforme.Icannotlettheholidayselapse(逝去)meaninglessly,myvacationshouldbeaphase(时期、阶段)ofharvest.Theeventsinmyplanshouldgivemeasenseofinfinitepotential.

Thefollowingplanmayrevealtheintensityofmydesiretotravel,workandstudyinthisvacation.InthefirstfewdaysIwanttoclimbMountHuaShanwithseveralfriendstorefreshourselves.ThenItendtovisitrelatives,seniorschoolteachersandformerclassmates(老同学).Besides,tofindoutthebestwaystocultivatemyabilities,Iwillfindaparttimejobandconductsomesocialinvestigation.

Inshort,Iwanttodointerestingthingsinthesummervacation.WhateverIdo,thegoalisthesame:togetnecessaryexperience,acquireknowledgeandbroadenmyhorizons.Thoughthesixweekvacationwillpassawayatlightningspeed,itsinfluenceisboundtolastlong.

核心剖析  本文作者长句、短句交替使用。文中长句显得容量大，表达了较为复杂完整、严密充实的思想内容。句子开头方式有：“Inthefirstfewdays”等介词短语作状语开句、“Whateverldo"等让步状语从句等句型开句。此外，句子主语除了代词I和it，还使用了多个名词，从而避免了从头到尾一“I”到底。在篇章中通过变化句子长度、句子开头，伞文表达错落有致，语言形式丰富多彩。