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AreStarsJustifiedtoObtainHighInes?

AreyouawareofanexpandinggroupofTValcoholicsemergingamongyourpeers,orsocalledsofapotatoes,enjoyingchannelsurfing,fascinatedbystarpursuing,chewingupgossipsinthecircle?Theunparallelboomofentertainmentandsportsindustryservesasthebestexampleoftheendurablerule;demandscreatemarkets,andmarketsensureines.

Theprosperityofentertainmentandsportscircleswas,actually,hardtoimagineintheolddayswhendramatistsweredebasedtolowstatusandathleteswerefedonnomorethanspiritualgrains.  However,  theopeningpolicyutterlytransformedpeople＇slifestylebyprovidingrichabundanceofbreadandwarmclothes.Therefore,moreandmorelaypeoplenolongerfeltcontentwithmaterialwealth,andtheirdesiretofulfillbothmaterialandspiritualneedscreatesthemarket,whichispartofthereasonforthestars＇highine.

Incontrastwithordinaryprofessionslikenurses,doctorsandteachers,ahigheradmissionthresholdislaidintheentertainmentandsportscircles.Acharmingface,elegantmanner,strongconstitutionareindispensablequalitieswhenanambitiousyoungmandreamsaboutcarvinganameoratleastmakingalivlnginthisfield.Duetothehighcosttoturnaninnocentbeautyintoanfascinatingfilmstar,highinesarechargedtomakeupforhisorherdiligenceandpressuresufferedinthiscruellypetitivecircle.What＇smore,ittakesthemostprecioustimeintheirwholelife.Howcanapopstarcountonanever-lastingcareertosupportalltherestofhisorherlife?Energyfadingaway,brillianceneverdazzlesagain.  Thedayisboundtoewhenfameandfortunesaygoodbyetothosepitiableout-of-datestars.Inaword,theirpresenthighinesmaybesetasideforfutureuse.Therefore,theprofessionmustbelucrative.

Anotherfactalsolendscredencetothisseeminglyunfairphenomenon.Notconfinedtotheirownprofession,thosefasbionablestarsexplorevariousapproachestoenlargetheirbanknotes,which,ineffect,bringaboutsomepositivesideeffects.Say,thehighfrequencyofexposuretovariousmediaearnsthesepopstarsamassofpassionateandloyalfans,whereas,theirenduringsupport,onthecontrary,addstothechanceofcharginganidealtransferalfeewhenhoppingtoanothercluborpany.Ontheotherhand,moderncitizensareeagertofindaventtoreleasetheirworkingstressandtheexcitementinwatchingasportgameprovidesanotheringredientforstars＇popularityandhighines.Onepartesdemandalwaysresultsinanother＇sconsiderablebenefits.

Admittedly,theexpandingboomofthesetwoindustriesprovestheirsocialvalueandthenecessityoftheirexistence,but

thatisnottosayotherordinaryprofessionsareoflessvalue.Afterall,thesociety＇sbasicmechanismisbuiltupbythoselesseyecatchinggroup,whotrytosatisfypeople＇sphysicalandmentalneeds;suchascuringdisastrousdiseases,providinguniversaleducation.Acareer＇sinnervalue,however,canneverbemeasuredbysecularbanknotes.Oneissuperficial,theotherisprofound;oneisshorttermed,theotherislong-lasting,neithercanreplacetheotherwhilebothbeautifypeople＇sdailylife.

Atlast,starsarejustifiedtoobtainhighinesbecausethere＇snotafairscaleavailabletomakesuchaparison.Everyphenomenonhasitsreasontosurvive.Weneedsportsandentertainment,thereforewepayforthem,andthat＇sit.

简  评

这是一篇议论娱乐圈的高额薪酬的文章，整篇文章在表达和论述上不乏几处闪光点，如第一句的引文就比较有新意：“AreyouawareOfanexpandinggroupOfTV—alcoholicsemergingamongyourpeers，OrsO—calledsofapotatoes，enjoyingchannelsurfing，fascinatedbystar—pursuing，chewinggossipslnthecircle?"自然导入文章的中心句“Demandscreatemarkets，whereasmarketsensureines．又如，“Acareer＇sinnervalue，however，can

neverbemeasuredbysecularbanknotes，justlikeanynoblecoursesneverbeingrewardedwithbonus．”(Para．Six)这个观点本身提得很好，这是文章的可取之处。

但通篇文章缺少一个贯穿全文的主线。虽说“Demandscreatemarkets，andmarketsensureines．”看似文章的中心句，但整个论述并没有围绕这一点展开，论说过程缺少层次感和条理性，看起来倒像东一笔，西一笔，想到哪儿，写到哪儿。第二段和第

五段似乎在讲人们的需要创造了这个市场，但并未重点展开论述，又夹在两条不相关的信息中间，因此没有说服力。

论说文首先是要有一条主线，即中心要明确。在展开论述时一定要思路清晰，条理分明，选择最有说服力的论据。论据不宜过多，太多就分散了读者的注意力，论述也可能显得空乏无力，选择两三点进行较深入透彻的展开，紧扣主题信息，展开论述。同时可以使用一些过渡词，或疑问、倒装句式等来加强文章的层次感，强化立场，丰富文章的表达，这样文章会更具有可读性。

(点评教师：卢爱华)