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FriendsofAllTypesMakeLifeColorful
Ilikeblue,butIdressmyselfingreen,redandyellow;Iliketea,butIdrinkmilk,coffeeandorangejuiceaswell.
Ihavefriends,andIpreferfriendsofalltypestofriendsofthesamekind.Inmyopinion,onecanbenefitfromvarioussortsoffriendsinthreeaspects.
First,whenyouareintrouble,youcangethelpintimefromfriends.Forohing,thesubstantialhelp.ItwouldbeashockwhentheteacherassignedyoutotakechargeofthewebsiteofclasswhenyouknewnothingaboutInter.ThenGodendowedyouwithafriendathand,aputerexpertwhoproficientlycuredyourheadachewithafewgentleclicksonthescreen.Youmustbethankfulforsuchagranting.Foranother,akindofenlightenment.WhengoingthroughtheMarxistphilosophyyesterday,Iwasconfusedbythestatement"negatethenegation."Poorinphilosophicalthinking,Iturnedtoafriendmajoringinlaw.Shedidn＇tquiteunderstanditeither,butshehadbeentaughtthatcriminalsanctionwasnegatingthenegationofcrime.Justasasparkle,thissimpleremarkburnedawayallthechaosinmyheadandmadeclearthedefinition.Amiracle,isn＇tit?
Second,variousfriendsleadyoutodifferentinspiration,andallowyoutoexperiencedifferentfun.Oneday,unusually,Iskippedmylunchandjusttookanappletoconsolemystomach.Myclassmate,thefuturejournalist,shoutedout,"Whatapieceofnews!Youarealsodieting?"Thenthefutureadvertisingexpertsaid,"Howcreative!Howdidyougetsuchanidea?"Infact,themostcreativeawardshouldgotothegirlwhomajorsinChineselanguage,"Withthefragrancewindingaboutyourfingers,Icanseethatanapplejustkissedyourlips."
Thethirdpointmaynotbewidelyapplicable. Infact,tomakeavarietyoffriendsisanrequirementofmymajor,journalism.Myhonorableprofessorstatedthisstraightforward,"Journalistsliveonnewsresources.Themostconvenientresourceisyourfriends.SoIstronglysuggestthatthosewhodon＇twanttostarvetodeathlearnsomepsychology,practiceyourmunicationskillsandmakefriendswithpeopleinasmanyfieldsaspossible!"
ThismaysoundtooradicalbutIstillthinkadiversityoffriendsaremorefavorable,bringingyouhelp,funandexperiencesandkeepingyoufreefromthedullmonologueofpeopleofsimilarcharacters.Justasvariouskindsofnutrimentskeepyouhealthy,variouskindsoffriendskeepyoulively.
简 评
本文是一篇议论文，论证“交不同的朋友比交同类朋友更有益。”开头富有特色，通过描述自己的实际生活将读者自然地引向主题。通篇立意新颖、条理清楚，结构明晰，分三点论述，每一点都有一句统领全段的主题句，展开的部分都紧扣本段论点，但方式决不雷同。引用的事例自然、贴切，语言也较生动、活泼，可谓有理有据，却不枯燥乏味，读来让人兴味盎然，相信同龄人看了更是有一种强烈的认同感。